Blog feedback and Learner Response

 WWW: You have made an excellent start in GCSE Media – well done! Your fruit bowl is superb – you’ve really captured the Winter palette beautifully. I’m also impressed with how you’ve checked your tracker and gone back to make sure all work is complete – that is a brilliant sign you have the right attitude and focus to succeed in your GCSEs. Keep up the good work!  

EBI: The key aspect to work on if we want to aim for the top grades is depth and detail in our written work – for example, the ‘connotation’ and ‘analysis’ paragraphs for denotation and connotation. Aim for an extended paragraph analysing a range of meanings that are created in the text.

The other area I would suggest working on is keeping an eye on your written English. Things like capital letters are important in written communication and getting them perfect in your blog is a great preparation for the later exams.


LR Questions:


What do you feel is your strongest piece of work so far?

I think my strongest piece of work so far is the winter fruit bowl because how I used a winter image to make my fruit bowl and how the colours really goes with it.


 What is your weakest? 

I think my weakest is the skittles denotation and connotation because I feel like I could have described it more.


What specific skills or knowledge do you need to develop over the rest of the course?

I think I need to be more resilient and try my best in all of the tasks I do and to also describe it as much I can with denotation and connotation. 

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