Preliminary exercise learner response
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full . If you've received your feedback via email, you can simply cut and paste it from the email into your blog. WWW Your alliterative masthead works in emphasising the overall tone of the magazine as one of realism and seriousness. The cover lines that you have written seem to be consistent with the gossip and celebrity news direction that you have taken with the bottom line of your cover. Using a combination of your cover image with yourself looking off into the distance and the well known London skyline gives the impression of looking into the future of seeking out success which I suspect is the goal. Your article within the 1 page spread meets the intended tone with a clear 'influencer' as your focus and their overall message of coming back from a crisis evident throughout. NEXT STEPS I would consider the positioning of your cover lines as they currently appear to be randomly placed rather than following a pattern. The font ch...